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Tuesday, July 21, 2009

最后的时光

密密麻麻地围了过来
一把鼻涕
战战兢兢地给我喂饭
不做饿鬼

庸庸碌碌
一生太长
嫣然一笑
一生太短

Law said...: Nice little poem. I don't get the first sentence though.; 7/26/2009 3:18 PM
Elizebeth D.L. said...: I don't get the last sentence..; 7/27/2009 5:53 PM
Steve Tan said...: Well, at the time I penned it, I thought my grandma who passed away last week in china was dying in sick bed, probably with mixed memories. If she could still recall my daughter's playful gestures, she might yearn to live a little longer.

Alas, I was wrong. She fell down at the alley in front of her house. It was heart attack.; 7/27/2009 10:40 PM
舞者 said...: My condolences.

Your explanation does take away all the sentimental elements.; 7/28/2009 9:48 PM
steve tan said...: Thanks.

My dad is still recovering from the loss.

and shame on me, I have met my grandma only once in my entire life.; 7/28/2009 9:51 PM
Anonymous said...: 来匆匆
人生似长

去匆匆
一生实短; 8/07/2009 9:33 PM
steve tan said...: 来匆匆
人生似长

去匆匆
一生实短

不知哪位高人写下这短短的四句，意境很高，谢谢。斗胆对上两句

娇滴滴
芳龄十八

笑嘻嘻
爱情萌芽; 8/08/2009 3:57 AM